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Sta.sh
1) The foreshortening works except in the abdomen, If you shrink it and move the pants up then the problem is solved.
2) I like the clouds but they seem unfinished at the bottom, from this angle I would say just add more clouds and Ta Da.
3) Personally I would like to see more of the sword, in fact it is a bit too straight, if you consider how the wrist would be placed keeping the arm in that angle, the sword would lay a bit more horizontally.
I hope my constructive criticism helps, let me know if you try and follow my advice and what results you obtained.
Keep up the good Work
Ivan
Starts a little skinny, then thickens and then back to stay thin. The body is skinny like i said before, and are a bit long. The shoulders are too close each other, men have their shoulders a little more distant from each other.
The colouring are good, but you can use more gradient, cause the shades sometimes are too different.
The drawing as a whole are good, but i only think that you have to improve these things, just try training more perspective, anatomy and just a little gradient. Sorry for any unfair criticism and keep up with the good work.
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