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OC RP - Just A Spark... by SakuraBomb OC RP - Just A Spark... by SakuraBomb
Aaron, about to use one of his most dangerous attacks - yes, that IS lightning.

Yyyyyeah, I'd run, too.

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Some musical inspiration (even if it doesn't seem like it xD)

[link] - "Undisclosed Desires" by Muse
[link] - "It's Not Your Fault" by AWOLNATION
[link] "Second Heaven" by Ryu (?)

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Artwork & Aaron S. Asher (C) *SakuraBomb

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PS. I hate perspective! D:<
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:iconpattyaan:
Well, i think that your character is too skinny and his raised arm are a little weird don't you think?
Starts a little skinny, then thickens and then back to stay thin. The body is skinny like i said before, and are a bit long. The shoulders are too close each other, men have their shoulders a little more distant from each other.
The colouring are good, but you can use more gradient, cause the shades sometimes are too different.
The drawing as a whole are good, but i only think that you have to improve these things, just try training more perspective, anatomy and just a little gradient. Sorry for any unfair criticism and keep up with the good work.
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:iconivandadajet:
I personally liked this piece, since you requested a critique I will point a couple things that I think may improve this image.

1) The foreshortening works except in the abdomen, If you shrink it and move the pants up then the problem is solved.

2) I like the clouds but they seem unfinished at the bottom, from this angle I would say just add more clouds and Ta Da.

3) Personally I would like to see more of the sword, in fact it is a bit too straight, if you consider how the wrist would be placed keeping the arm in that angle, the sword would lay a bit more horizontally.

I hope my constructive criticism helps, let me know if you try and follow my advice and what results you obtained.

Keep up the good Work

Ivan
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:iconasha-anne:
Asha-Anne Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
great perspective, and a lovely drawing style, your brush strokes are very well placed. awesome drawing :)
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:iconkirstinlove:
KirstinLove Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nice perspective ^w^
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:iconshirouyuki:
shirouyuki Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
OMG this is awesome D:
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:iconroamingtigress:
roamingtigress Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012
Pretty nice work on the perspective here :)
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:icondaggeo:
Daggeo Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice perspectice
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:iconburiart:
BuriART Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow amazing work i really like it, very good :)
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:iconin2umniakillh3r:
In2umniaKillH3r Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the point of view on this one.
The lighting and colors are great.
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:iconxdimov:
XDimov Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012   General Artist
interesting style and fresh color combination, I like it ;]
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:iconbelievetomakeadream:
BelievetoMakeADream Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
This is really well done! I really love the clouds. :)
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:iconl-leew:
L-Leew Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cool! XD
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:iconfireblazescorch:
FireBlazeScorch Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
I love the angle and the colouring/shading, it makes it looks very very dramatic. Great job n.n!
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:iconreadme1212:
Readme1212 Featured By Owner Jun 10, 2012  Student Interface Designer
I love everything about this picture!
Theres not much i can critique XD
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:iconblacktiger5:
Blacktiger5 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Awwsome pic! well done =D
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:iconvriskca244:
VrisKCa244 Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student General Artist
excellent use of light and shading here! c:
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:iconbariarti:
Bariarti Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice work, the lightning effect looks pretty cool^^
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:icongivememoonlight:
GiveMeMoonlight Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2012  Student General Artist
Love the colours and wings here. And the icon (Skarmory is still my favourite lead)
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:icondedieyes:
dedieyes Featured By Owner May 19, 2012  Student General Artist
I really love the angle of this. It is not a very common angle.
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:iconariis:
Ariis Featured By Owner May 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
the view is epic, also the shading!!reminds me of AION :heart:
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:iconscarlette13:
scarlette13 Featured By Owner May 11, 2012
cool picture. I love those wings, they´re just perfect.
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:iconapricotmouse:
apricotmouse Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist
lovely use of light and colours with great perspective! good luck on critiques opinion, (sorry if this should have been a critique but I'm pretty sure you could adapt your shape of Zoid's to help the proportion on people's bodies ^^) :3 great work!
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:iconsakurabomb:
SakuraBomb Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ;u;

And ooh! Yeah, I always use a reference when I draw Zoids, but never when I draw people.
It's no surprise the Zoids turn out way more accurate and better. ^^;

I have much work to do~

Thank you! :hug:
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:iconapricotmouse:
apricotmouse Featured By Owner May 9, 2012  Hobbyist
You're so very welcome ^w^! good luck with the work too xD, Glad to point out the tip :3 cause they'll be amazingerrr (since your work already is) o...o
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:iconsharpenarrow:
SharpenArrow Featured By Owner May 3, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Beautiful work!! :D
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:iconsakurabomb:
SakuraBomb Featured By Owner May 4, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you! ^^
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:iconxenonia:
Xenonia Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I like the shiny colors^^
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:iconhochmut:
Hochmut Featured By Owner May 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really like the colours of the clothes and the angle.
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:iconclimbtothestars:
ClimbToTheStars Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2012  Student General Artist

Love the perspective on this! c:
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:icontonypete:
TonyPete Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Nice composition.
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:iconmoonrisepower:
Moonrisepower Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
This is so cool! I love the angle.
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:iconultrazero:
Ultrazero Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
very well made, love the perspective in this one
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:iconbentarrow:
bentarrow Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012   Traditional Artist
nice
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:iconpjchillout:
PJChillOut Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012
awesome character (: very interesting
the sky is very nice (:
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:iconcreyk:
creyk Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
The atmosphere is lovely, I love how calm it is, I would be happy to be a part of the picture, or maybe to be there instead of the character...I love if a picture is harmonic like this:love::sun:
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:iconlttleghost:
LttleGhost Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Cool perspective!
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:iconblazekid7:
blazekid7 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
You have done a great job! the picture looks really good,well done! ^_^
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:iconmeep-and-mushrat:
Meep-and-Mushrat Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Professional Filmographer
Cool! I love the perspective and the clouds! Great work!
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:iconsarastallet99:
sarastallet99 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student General Artist
Nice work! :D
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:iconxxanemia:
XXAnemia Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012
pretty epic! you did a great job on the perspective, low angle views are the hardest to draw
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:iconshady767:
shady767 Featured By Owner Apr 24, 2012  Student General Artist
niice (y)
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:icondpalev9:
dpalev9 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Student Digital Artist
simple but shows so much power. great perspective!
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:iconmoncherineko23:
MoncheriNeko23 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
nice!
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:iconshi-yue:
Shi-yue Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the perspective even if you don't:D Nice job!
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:iconrailguntogepi:
RailgunTogepi Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
PERSCHPEKTIVE!!! :D
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:iconannmariebone:
AnnMarieBone Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Professional Traditional Artist
I love the unusual angle of this drawing!
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:iconandrea1981g:
Andrea1981G Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Wow, this looks so impressive, amazing colouring!
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:iconmaster-pixel:
Master-Pixel Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Awesome perspective :) Makes him look dominating :)
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:icongenerallee1807:
GeneralLee1807 Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I think the perspective is pretty decent actually, nicely done.
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:iconsetokaibadesign:
SetoKaibaDesign Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
What a great scene here! I love the whole atmoshere! Your pic is fantasstic presented, well done.
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:iconkirinoru:
Kirinoru Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2012  Student Artist
this looks EPIC! :D :D nice colors! <33 and dynamic ;)
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:iconcrystalpicard:
CrystalPicard Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Sometimes when I'm scrolling through deviations, I watch TV to sort of pass the time.
You know, give a little to the community and see some great art.
I stopped to comment because this one really caught my eye. The colors work great together and the vision you had made my kinda stop
for a second to appreciate it.
Really great work. <3
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