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January 9, 2012
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OC RP - Just A Spark... by SakuraBomb OC RP - Just A Spark... by SakuraBomb
Aaron, about to use one of his most dangerous attacks - yes, that IS lightning.

Yyyyyeah, I'd run, too.


Some musical inspiration (even if it doesn't seem like it xD)

[link] - "Undisclosed Desires" by Muse
[link] - "It's Not Your Fault" by AWOLNATION
[link] "Second Heaven" by Ryu (?)


Artwork & Aaron S. Asher (C) *SakuraBomb


PS. I hate perspective! D:<
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Well, i think that your character is too skinny and his raised arm are a little weird don't you think?
Starts a little skinny, then thickens and then back to stay thin. The body is skinny like i said before, and are a bit long. The shoulders are too close each other, men have their shoulders a little more distant from each other.
The colouring are good, but you can use more gradient, cause the shades sometimes are too different.
The drawing as a whole are good, but i only think that you have to improve these things, just try training more perspective, anatomy and just a little gradient. Sorry for any unfair criticism and keep up with the good work.
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I personally liked this piece, since you requested a critique I will point a couple things that I think may improve this image.

1) The foreshortening works except in the abdomen, If you shrink it and move the pants up then the problem is solved.

2) I like the clouds but they seem unfinished at the bottom, from this angle I would say just add more clouds and Ta Da.

3) Personally I would like to see more of the sword, in fact it is a bit too straight, if you consider how the wrist would be placed keeping the arm in that angle, the sword would lay a bit more horizontally.

I hope my constructive criticism helps, let me know if you try and follow my advice and what results you obtained.

Keep up the good Work

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Asha-Anne Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
great perspective, and a lovely drawing style, your brush strokes are very well placed. awesome drawing :)
KirstinLove Aug 16, 2012  Student Digital Artist
nice perspective ^w^
shirouyuki Aug 14, 2012  Professional Digital Artist
OMG this is awesome D:
Pretty nice work on the perspective here :)
Daggeo Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Nice perspectice
BuriART Aug 14, 2012  Student Digital Artist
wow amazing work i really like it, very good :)
In2umniaKillH3r Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
I like the point of view on this one.
The lighting and colors are great.
XDimov Aug 14, 2012   General Artist
interesting style and fresh color combination, I like it ;]
BelievetoMakeADream Aug 13, 2012  Student General Artist
This is really well done! I really love the clouds. :)
L-Leew Aug 13, 2012  Student Digital Artist
Cool! XD
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